I chose this photo of your gallery to critique, because I feel it's the best one. (And I think you feel the same way since you posted it twice! ) I will keep comments about the photography itself to a minimum because you are a model are (I guess) primarily interested in a critique on you as a model and not so much on the people you have worked with.
You are obviously a ridiculously gorgeous girl, so that is the last I'll say of that. Styling seems spot one for the intended Marilyn look, though I think the hair could've been a little more extravagant, the corset a little more frilly and the make-up a little more extreme. Especially your lips, which have an extremely attractive shape and size, need extra care *because* they are the size they are. Shading and depth will go a long way to raise a great shot to an amazing shot (this is something I've especially noticed on other photo's in your gallery and is only a slight issue in this picture because of the lighter color lipstick used).
Your pose is excellent and nonchalant, the look is sultry and intense with the right amount of arrogance that really makes the look work. Because of the framing the photographer chose, your thigh seems a little big, even though any photographer can see it's because of before mentioned framing.
All in all a great shot of an amazing model. You are obviously very talented and I'm sure you will do very well. Good luck!