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Coralyn. by PorcelainCora Coralyn. by PorcelainCora
Marilyn Inspired : )

Photographer: Tim Sayer - [link]
MUA: Elizabeth Tolley
Model: Me
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I chose this photo of your gallery to critique, because I feel it's the best one. (And I think you feel the same way since you posted it twice! ;)) I will keep comments about the photography itself to a minimum because you are a model are (I guess) primarily interested in a critique on you as a model and not so much on the people you have worked with.

You are obviously a ridiculously gorgeous girl, so that is the last I'll say of that. Styling seems spot one for the intended Marilyn look, though I think the hair could've been a little more extravagant, the corset a little more frilly and the make-up a little more extreme. Especially your lips, which have an extremely attractive shape and size, need extra care *because* they are the size they are. Shading and depth will go a long way to raise a great shot to an amazing shot (this is something I've especially noticed on other photo's in your gallery and is only a slight issue in this picture because of the lighter color lipstick used).

Your pose is excellent and nonchalant, the look is sultry and intense with the right amount of arrogance that really makes the look work. Because of the framing the photographer chose, your thigh seems a little big, even though any photographer can see it's because of before mentioned framing.

All in all a great shot of an amazing model. You are obviously very talented and I'm sure you will do very well. Good luck!
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VeryLargeRodent Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
Beautiful model, corset, pose, makeup an lighting.  "Helmet hair" diminishes it, though.
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dreamdesigner442 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Sometimes words can be meaningless!Now just your picture talks Cora:-))
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lichtschrijver Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Professional Photographer
I love the light!
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devonhants Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gorgeous....
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55HotGirlLover33 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Classic beauty and pose
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zepdiggity Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
you wouldve owned the 50's!
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PorcelainCora Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011   Artist
hehehe, thank you love!
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zepdiggity Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011
anytime ;)
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ukwreckdiver Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Absolutely wonderful :D
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PorcelainCora Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011   Artist
Thank you so much :)
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